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Voice
Contributed by
Eve
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:31:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Esoteric words hover
Mind jades itself for cover
Don't want to understand
This next adjacent hand
A cryptic game of cards
And nothing efficent guards
Incomprehensible static
That becomes wandering and erratic
Can't ever be free
Of these voices enrapturing me
I'm beguiled but at the same time
Repelled by the whispers of the sublime
Break free before a breakdown
I must be the only one to save me now
Fall out before I fall down
Though this ghostly choir is all around
No clear articulation through this
Earth-bound haunting cold Abyss
No lucid call through it all
So free flies away and I finally fall...
Copyright ©
Eve
... [
2003-11-28 14:31:12]
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Re: Voice
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:10:37 PM AEST
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I like this a lot. Powerful emotive words. Well done!
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Re: Voice
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by Rissa on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:08:01 PM AEST
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| Ooooh. I like, Eveh. |
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Re: Voice
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:57:08 PM AEST
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| Surprise, surprise, I love this! Such emotion, I am definitely tuned into this one on a personal level. Excellent. |
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Re: Voice
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by CrystalSilence on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:28:56 PM AEST
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| You held me captive with every line.Excellent! |
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