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My Light
Contributed by
crystalsilence
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 07:09:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Deep set in my make-up
There inside the darkest room
Shadows laugh and taunt me
I cringe within the gloom
A product of my past
A slave to all that stood
Helplessly I watched on
As bad stole me from the good
Still today I shudder
At the thought of all that was
For sometimes I still wonder
If my breath is a lost cause
Yet even through my downers
I still see a shining light
One that has me steadied
And keeps me from the night
Night time,wheres there's memories
Of all the ghosts that haunt and tease
Demons from so long ago
That will not grant me full release
Still I see the light
Shining closer than before
It holds me with such strength
I stumble,but not fall
Closer to this brilliance
Is where I may find some peace
And as I walk towards the glow
I find him waiting there for me
My timid smile,so frightened
A thought to turn and run away
But with care he whispers to my fears
"I am your home,its safe to stay"
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crystalsilence
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Re: My Light
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 08:16:28 AM AEST
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| beautiful...just beautiful....sandy |
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Re: My Light
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by Kie on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 08:52:54 AM AEST
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Inner reflection placed into words.
Very well done.
Kie |
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Re: My Light
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:29:29 AM AEST
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This is exceptional as was your last write. In fact as have been all your writes here so far. You are more than just a great addition to this site...you are one of the best here already. You have a fan ;o)
Larry ( rakerman1999)
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Re: My Light
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:39:21 PM AEST
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| moving poem, coming out of the dark no easy thing. said you were good, had to see for myself.~~KANG' I~~ |
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