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Angels Cannot Die
Contributed by
puppy_dog_eyes
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:19:29 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Shocked, choked, When I read the chilling words
Sick feeling, the pit of my stomach churned
So puzzled why, what was the cause?
What plague spread through your mind
Cold shivers took me by suprise, sent spiralling deep inside
Your wish was to take your sweet life away
Put out the light of your darkest day
I did not know you through those times,much later I felt your pain
Reliving despair and your emptiness
Replayed on the page again
Your destiny I know is here
For angels cannot die
Your fate to touch more hearts and minds, not fall to death's goodbye
So no sad end, hold onto life, whenever your soul is weak
Remember those whose helping hands can give you what you seek
Your life is so precious
A gift so unique
To those with the eyes that can see
Not just wife and mother the roles that you play
But a cherished and deep friend to me
In time you will walk to heaven's gate
You will fly through a golden sky
But your mark on the world
It will never fade
For angels cannot die
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Re: Angels Cannot Die
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by M on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:26:04 AM AEST
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Omg. This is an absolutely beautiful poem. i hope you showed it to your friend, it is so inspirational to both her and the rest of us that have contemplated suicide. Absolutely beautiful.
EmilyxXx |
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Re: Angels Cannot Die
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:51:12 AM AEST
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Aww, very beautiful and inspirational |
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Re: Angels Cannot Die
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by Aika on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:00:58 AM AEST
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| Excellent.. you know.. nd I know..:-) love,aika:-) |
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Re: Angels Cannot Die
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 08:21:29 AM AEST
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| your poem very inspirational..i love it..and so will that friend..i rate this poem a 5 if there was a 10 i would had clicked it instead...good write.....sandy |
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Re: Angels Cannot Die
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by rosethorn100 on
Sunday, 26th June 2005 @ 06:30:18 AM AEST
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omg steve what a poem- am nearly in tears, so touching, so deep and so beautiful.
I hope your friend will soon realize this in not a soloution - yes life is tough but hopefully with the poem and her innerself she will get through this - excellant caring poem
roseyyyyyyyyyyy xxx |
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