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Smutný andělSad angel
Contributed by
Aika
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:49:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Potkala jsem anděla,
povídám mu:
"Copak to děláš?"
On totiž ten anděl
zemí pohnout chtěl
Povídá mi andílek:
"chci změnit lidi a to hned"
Zděsím se a říkám:
"To není věc lehká"
Koukne se na mě velkýma očima,
zamrká a povídá:
"Proč si to myslíš,
já přeci znám lidi,
budu je s láskou učit"
Dobrá, dobrá tedy,
kéž pohneš i ledy
pro případ, že ti někdo ublíží
budu ti poblíž
Potkám anděla o pár dní později
ptám se:"copak pláčeš, anděli?"
"Lidi jsou plni nenávisti,
lidi neodpouští,
lidi neumí milovat,
lidi se chtějí vychloubat,
lidi nežijí pro to, co mají,
lidi chtějí, co nedá se najít,
lidi se nectí a nenechají žít
lidi,.....jsou lidi
a já chci odejít
Nechte si zemi, mám jí dost
nechte si sebe a svou zlost
až ztratíte to málo, jste měli
a zavoláte..."pomoz,anděli",
nevím, zda budu vás slyšet
nevím, zda budu vás vidět
Nevím ani, zda se radši nenechat
v pekle smažit, než pomoct vám
jenž zabíjíte sami sebe,
Lidem Zemi, Andělům Nebe...."´
I met an angel and
I said:
"what are you doing?"
the angel just wanted
to save the Earth
Lil Angel telling me:
"I want to change people,
and right now and here"
Shocked I am replying:
"it is not that easy"
Angel looks at me with those huge eyes
winks and again tells me that:
"why do you think
I know people perfectly
I will be learning them with love"
"Good, good then
I wish you to "move the ice"
for the case someone hurts you
I am just behind"
I am meeting Angel,
just after few nights
asking him:
"what is wrong? why you cry?"
People are full of hate
people do not forgive and
people can not love
people want to brag
people do not live for what they have
people want what´s undiscovered
people don´t honor and don´t let live
People.. are people
and I want to leave
Have the Earth for yourself
I am tired of it
when you lose what you had
and again call,"angel help"
I am not sure whether I will hear you
I am not sure whether I will see
I do not even know,if I do not let me
to burn in the hell
better than all of you you to help
to you, who kill one another each day
Earth for the people
Angels go to heaven!
Copyright ©
Aika
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2003-11-28 03:49:27]
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Re: Smutný andělSad angel
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:57:15 AM AEST
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Great..it is really a thought provoking write.
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Re: Smutný andělSad angel
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:21:38 AM AEST
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Yet another wonderful piece, your work continues to grow Aika.
Here's to many more
xx steve |
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Re: Smutný andělSad angel
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 12:15:02 PM AEST
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Oh Aika, this is exceptional, indeed. It seems as you write in your own language and then compose into to English it comes out brighter and plainer each time.
This is a most timely write Aika...I would imagine even the angels are discouraged, knowing how much God loves each and every one of us, and having to watch this horrible slaughter....your words put it so eloquently...Beautiful and truthful poem
lovingcritters
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Re: Smutný andělSad angel
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:17:20 PM AEST
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| That was pretty good. I liked the message. |
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Re: Smutný andělSad angel
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st December 2003 @ 07:55:27 PM AEST
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| Ajko moje , Princezno Draci:) jen kouknout sem me staci :) Basnicky hezke pises, smutno vsak z nekterych vyzaruje.. Ale jsou moc hezke.. Rytir |
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Re: Smutný andělSad angel
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 05:35:49 AM AEST
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Wonderfully written...great message to all.....
Hugs
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