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waiting in vain
Contributed by
tWiStEd
on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:40:27 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I've been searching for so long
for someone who will care
until you came into my life
i never thought that i'll love you
From the start i already knew
that you don't care at all
sending each other's letters began
closeness had come up between us
Time passed by, my heart grew tired
waiting and hoping
for the love i thought that's deep inside
pretending to hide from reality
just to stop this pain inside me
But now you've found your way back to her
i'll go and turn my way
for you are not for me to own
but still... i love you.
Copyright ©
tWiStEd
... [
2003-11-28 01:40:27]
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Re: waiting in vain
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:04:31 AM AEST
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| well written.. |
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Re: waiting in vain
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by recalcitrant on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:30:46 AM AEST
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| hey thats a really good poem |
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Re: waiting in vain
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by Kie on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 09:27:54 AM AEST
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Wonderful writing and insightful.
Great job, I commend you..
Kie |
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Re: waiting in vain
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:35:43 AM AEST
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Sad to love someone but they not love you back, sad when someone loves you and you cannot return the same love. Sad write, but a good one. All the best.
Emma. |
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