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Love like a Tornado
Contributed by
deathwriter
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Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:32:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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A tornado, it starts off as a slight breeze and gets stronger by the minute. After it’s the strongest it can get, it destroys everything in its path, and never can take it back for all the people it has hurt. Its just a big gust of wind it cant do anything but do what is intended. Kinda like your love for me, it started as a crush, got stronger every min, and then you broke up with me destroing all my feelings, hopes, and dreams. It happened so suddenly, I couldn’t see it coming, but one thing different from your love and a tornado is a tornado intends on ruining everything, while you had a choice and decide to crush my every belif that you were the one for me and I could never be hurt by the three simple words of I Love You.
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Re: Love like a Tornado
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by JPMcMillan on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:38:52 AM AEST
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| Great stuff! It's quite scary showing our inner-self, not knowing whether it's going to be loved, rejectected or understood. |
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Re: Love like a Tornado
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:59:24 AM AEST
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| I fail to read such a paragraph |
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Re: Love like a Tornado
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:59:57 AM AEST
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| An amazing write..I understood your speed and emotion..but its presentation in the form of a paragraph really causes strain to the reader's eyes..try to put your writings in a good poetic form. venkat |
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Re: Love like a Tornado
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 08:25:46 AM AEST
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| loved how you said love is like a tornado.....so true so true....very very good write...enjoyed it....sandy |
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Re: Love like a Tornado
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:54:35 PM AEST
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Great analogy..... loved it...
Jenni |
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