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Her In My Memory
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
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Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:31:03 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Through my little window.
I see the vast,endless sky,
I see the freshest buds grow,
I see the grass sway by and by.
I see her now,
Frolicking in her white dress,
A sunhat in one delicate hand,
Embracing the vastness of the blue sky.
Skylarks chirped for her laugh,
The sun smiled at her smile,
The gentle breeze swirled around her,
In a gentle but loving caress.
She is now no longer there,
Out in the sunshine and freedom,
Out among the flowers she loved,
Nor is she singing among the birds.
She is now bound in chains and bolts,
Bound to her duties and responsibilities,
Away from the kind sun,
Away from the gentle breeze.
I long to be her again,
I long for the key to my chains,
Set me free now,
And lead me to my pleasant meadow.
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Crimsonflame
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2003-11-27 23:31:03]
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by tWiStEd on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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what a very vivid images you have...
beautifully written... the setting is just awesome.. but i just hope... you'll find the way to her... |
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by nEuRoPsYcHo on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:43:14 PM AEST
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hey...
it's a nice poem...
keep up the good work...
u can do it i'm sure...
=) |
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by secretwind on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 12:49:53 AM AEST
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Ahhh memories of what use to be,good write.
The Wind.... |
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by JPMcMillan on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:06:56 AM AEST
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I'm a jumky for beautiful imagery, thanks for feeding my addiction!
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by recalcitrant on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:37:55 AM AEST
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dont we all long for the good old times
awesome poem
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 15th January 2004 @ 08:32:15 AM AEST
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| thanks for sharing, post more, the contrast of the passion and life in the first four stanzas and the crushing reality of the final two stanzas is striking |
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Re: Her In My Memory
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 06:21:42 AM AEST
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I really liked this one! The words of a heart longing for freedom... May you find it. Great poem, you spoke wrote your thoughts with talent.
Take care.
David |
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