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Am I Really Here??
Contributed by
Serendippitty
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:21:22 PM in AEST
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Is anyone out there
can you hear my cries?
Can anyone see me,
see the tears pouring from my eyes?
I'm standing in a space
the world going round and round
I'm screaming and I'm shouting
but yet I'm not making a sound.
I'm standing in the crowd
can you see my face?
Can you touch me gently
and feel my heart race?
Can anyone answer my question?
Can someone answer my prayer?
Can someone really love me
or just acknowledge that I'm there?
Is anyone out there
because I am lost and alone
waiting for someone to find me
Someone to take me home
Copyright ©
Serendippitty
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2003-11-27 23:21:22]
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Re: Am I Really Here??
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:59:16 PM AEST
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A sad and lonely poem I really like the second verse
"I'm screaming and I'm shouting
but yet I'm not making a sound."
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Re: Am I Really Here??
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by secretwind on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:13:43 AM AEST
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I FEEL YA ON THIS ONE,WELL DONE.
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Re: Am I Really Here??
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:32:40 AM AEST
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Beautifully written, I enjoyed this a lot.
I think too that we all feel out of place sometimes.
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Re: Am I Really Here??
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:32:52 PM AEST
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Interesting questions...I think we all ask them at some point in our lives..... hope you find the answers soon.... Good write
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