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One By One
Contributed by
sugar0986
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:18:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Falling one by one,
each drop hits the floor,
with a splash.
My heart is aching so bad,
that the tears begin to turn to ice.
Freezing against my face,
I slowly peel each tear off my face.
As the pain of my heart,
slowly increases,
my heart rips in half,
with jagged edges down the middle.
I still stare at the pictures,
of us together,
hoping it might help me cure,
but it only makes it worse.
I need to say goodbye,
but not sure how.
So I guess this will have to do.
I Love You,
Goodbye.
Copyright ©
sugar0986
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2003-11-27 23:18:52]
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Re: One By One
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:59:07 PM AEST
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Aww this is so sad, but so beautifully written...
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Re: One By One
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by EmSal on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 03:09:59 AM AEST
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Awww I know, letting go is so hard. I can't say how long it can take cause I still am trying, and the pain is easing but it is still there - it has been a year...and still going. Things have a way of unhealing too just when you think everything is going to be alright. So I wish you all the best. Good write too. :)
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