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Before its too late
Contributed by
Jilli_Bean
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 09:47:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Read it again,
What your seeing in me
is wrong
and I read that you really don't care
you see my eyes
yet you completely look away and detach from me
maybe its all the confusion that consumes them
or all the heartache that causes them to leak
why not the anxiety or anger that makes them turn a ravished red
how about the just plain paranoia that creates a glazed shelter over these
scared, cut up eyes kind of like my arms
But my eyes are so much worse 10 times infact
and yet you still continue to deny this
though its only a phase,
soon she'll grow up
I just don't want to live
my eyes are burning now
I and I truly believe that you don't even care
I mean I have already cried and ocean of tears
and I am no where near ever drying
I'm dying though
and every breath I take
is one breath closer to my last
So please read again
...Before its too late
Copyright ©
Jilli_Bean
... [
2003-11-27 21:47:57]
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Re: Before its too late
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by Chanti on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:34:07 PM AEST
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| I hope that it is a phase that you are going through, but those who you think dont care about you truly do. Beautiful write. |
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Re: Before its too late
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 04:38:20 AM AEST
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Lovely work.I wrote a piece to a friend when I read her suicide poen, to remind her there are always people who care...........and there are.
tc steve |
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Re: Before its too late
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by M on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:58:40 AM AEST
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I too hope this is just a phase, but i know exactly what you're going through, apart from i know there are people who care for me, i just can't understand why.
PM me if you'd like to talk, and try not to give up hope.
EmilyxXx |
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Re: Before its too late
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by stargazer on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 06:15:34 PM AEST
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"So please read again
...Before its too late"
After our talk on the phone the other night I am not sure as to what you expect me to say. You taught me a lot... a lot about life, myself, and what I am going through. But more importantly you taught me to not give up on my dad, even though the process has already begun.
... You've been through a lot and I can't even begin to understand and comprehend but just know... I am always just a call away. If you need to just get away... my door is always open. Don't hold back. Losing you... would be losing part of myself.
It was you that taught me how to write, that I could write... and you never let me down. :'( So just hold on... if you feel like letting go... it'll get better than you know. Amy
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