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My feelings
Contributed by
nessa_lee
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 08:58:42 PM in AEST
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When I cut myself
I feel pain
but not pain of hurt
pain of glory
It's unexplainable
why I do it
I just do
I get so mad
at myself & the world
I never thought
my life would come
to this
but now that it has
I can't stop
It's not that I
do it everyday
just maybe a few
times a month,
maybe not even that
I don't know what's
driven me this far
but I hope not to far
to where I end
everything.
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nessa_lee
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2003-11-27 20:58:42]
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Re: My feelings
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 09:02:21 PM AEST
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Yuck. This piece is so stale and predictable.
There's hundreds of slash-em-up poems on this site. |
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Re: My feelings
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 09:17:40 PM AEST
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...If you're your going to rant about poems you dont like, atleast sign in or register here. Have some guts for crying out loud.
Anyways... Pay no mind to the Ignorant, I for one enjoyed this poem. I used to be this way so I can understand your pain to a certain extent. I've written many poems like this. *Hope that satisfied 'anonymous' over there* It feels better to me once I've gotten some of it off my mind..instead of actually picking up the blade.
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Re: My feelings
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by seth on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 12:03:19 PM AEST
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| I think it is great that you can express your feelings through poetry. your poems are all good. they have such deep feeling. |
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Re: My feelings
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by gee on
Tuesday, 9th December 2003 @ 12:48:06 PM AEST
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| sad that life has to take us on these kinds of side trips. I understand and emplathize with hurt and pain but not really self inflicted. When I get really low I dig really deep for the reason why I want to be here. I envision myself like that little toy that when it bumps into something it turns in a new direction. If what I am doing at the time becomes a problem, then I just take a different path. |
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