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Three weeks
Contributed by
forever_lonely
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Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 07:04:25 PM in AEST
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I lost you just but three weeks today
I still smell the sweet aroma of your hair
I couldnt bare the day i found out
Those words still linger deep within my mind
She wont last long, im sorry
What could i do, what could i say
How could i have know this to be our last day
I rushed to where you lay
Like angel in perfection you seemed so..
.. so peaceful
If only i could change this, why cant i do it
Im so useless, this love so strong
and i am helpless to save it
I sorry my love, but im still with you
You were awake when i got there
Your eyes still light like the day we first met
And even in the midst of all that happened
I found myself lost within your beauty
I couldnt say anything.. i could only watch you
I looked into your eyes as i watched you slip
Im sorry i couldnt save you
I still remember the very moment
When i knew i wouldnt see you alive again
Your soft hand lost all life
As i cradled it so close, i remember...
I watched you leave, my heart grew lost
Love like glass i felt shattered
Why did this happen to someone so angelic
Its been three loong weeks my love
and your still with me today
I want to be so close to you right now
Goodbye my love..
.. i'll love you forever
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forever_lonely
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2003-11-27 19:04:25]
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Re: Three weeks
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 08:14:21 PM AEST
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Awe, this is to terribly sad and sweet. This by far is my worst fear, I hope not to ever lose my love like this..just...terrible...Great write tho, really emotional
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Re: Three weeks
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 09:51:00 PM AEST
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Beautifully touching...
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Re: Three weeks
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by hawaii06 on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 06:32:40 PM AEST
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I love this poem...it is so sad and tragic..but in written in a great way...I'm sorry to hear this..and I hope you get better..
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