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Come For Me
Contributed by
crystalsilence
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 05:02:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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In your eyes I see such warmth..soul of tender song
In your arms,I'll find my home,it's with you that I belong
To my ears you are the soothing,that comforts me with peace
Collective are my feelings,and they ache for sweet release
Capturing my thoughts,and always in my heart
From morning smiles and nightly dreams,never do you part
In my mind I reach with love,to softly touch your face
Then into you I sway a little,lost in your embrace
Come for me tonight,snatch me from reality's hands
Take me anywhere my love,beside you I will stand
For the distance is my darkness,my morning is your night
As I await you by this window,that holds the candlelight
You will know the destination,by the way the wind will blow
To carry you across the miles,this journey you will know
When you see the brightest star,turn left and wait a while
Its here that your direction will be altered by my smile
The smile that you gave to me,when you passed to me your love
You will see it shimmer below,from where you are above
Come for me tonight,snatch me from reality's hands
Take me anywhere my love,beside you I will stand
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2003-11-27 17:02:22]
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Re: Come For Me
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by fallensilence on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 05:12:03 PM AEST
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| awesome job with this write. very descriptive keep it up. -david |
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Re: Come For Me
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:54:37 PM AEST
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wow....quite a change from your first post and I love it! Especially the line "come for me tonight snatch me from realitys hands". Reality sucks as far as I am concerned but this poem is beautiful.
Very well done :o)
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Re: Come For Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 08:49:32 PM AEST
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Oh wow!! I think I'm in love with you!! lol I have never read such beautiful poetry! You are a true artist.
Ben |
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Re: Come For Me
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by secretwind on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 03:19:13 AM AEST
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well done....
The Wind |
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