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Disappear
Contributed by
MoonlitAngel
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 04:40:45 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I can't be who I was before
I loved too much and I can't anymore
I always tried to be the light
Now I'm trying to fade into the night
I disappear before your eyes
But my pain you don't seem to recognize
So as I slowly slip away
I'll be screaming the things I need to say
I HATE THE WORLD!
I only have enough love left for you
That's why I pushed them all away
I don't care about anyone but you
I HATE MYSELF!
As long as I can breathe inside my skin
I cant be anything you want
That's why I need to find some peace within
The sun, it always shines too bright
And happiness always holds me too tight
I need to choke on bitter air
And how the hell are you still unaware?
I'm scared to face the human race
'Cause everywhere I go I'm out of place
So I'll give them something to judge
Give myself a reason to hold a grudge
I need to bleed
'Cause it shows me there's still something inside
But you give me the will to love
You woke me up when I thought I had died
I need to hurt
'Cause if there's nothing left of me to save
Then I can concentrate on you
Shut my dirty mouth and learn to behave
I can only relax
When darkness surrounds me
And I can only sleep
When your arms are around me
They say ignorance is bliss
Well I can ignore myself best
When I melt into the background
So melt into me and let's disappear
Copyright ©
MoonlitAngel
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2003-11-27 16:40:45]
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Re: Disappear
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by CrystalSilence on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 05:12:40 PM AEST
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Great write
"I can only relax
When darkness surrounds me
And I can only sleep
When your arms are around me
They say ignorance is bliss
Well I can ignore myself best
When I melt into the background
So melt into me and let's disappear"
These lines are unreal.Chorus of a song I believe :) |
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Re: Disappear
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by blueheart on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 02:58:34 AM AEST
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| Brimming with emotion. Very nice. |
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Re: Disappear
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by venkat on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 05:12:23 AM AEST
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At last to melt down..then it can't be a dark..
o.k..girl.. disappear then. blessings..venkat |
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Re: Disappear
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:31:30 AM AEST
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| Wow. I could totally relate to that feeling. I really liked the write hon. This was pretty good. Heh. |
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Re: Disappear
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 02:32:36 AM AEST
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| that was great. |
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Re: Disappear
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 6th December 2003 @ 11:48:07 PM AEST
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| mmmm.... lovely and dreamy:) i especially adore how you ended this! hugs n' love nessa |
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