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i gotta go to work

Contributed by loopylou on Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:22:13 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry

im sorry i feel so much anger
its wasted on people like you lot
people who dont feel
people who dont care they dont feel
im paying for caring now
with the price of hurt from betrayle
not from one friend but about twenty
they all just keep kicking me down
but then again i wouldnt call you people
more monsters
but ill leave you be
hoping your just leave me
i wont have good memories
ill just forget you
and be glad your gone
ill move on
let you use each other till you get worn out
then your fade away
my light just gets brighter
as i persue my future
your money gose towards drugs
your money towards lies
your lifestyles draging you down
sudenly im your boss i start kicking you around
because i have fun
but im a good kid
i always stuck out from you
your light just gets dimmer
as you waste away
i wish i could watch
but ive got to go to work

Copyright © loopylou ... [ 2003-11-27 14:22:13]
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Re: i gotta go to work (User Rating: 1 )
by ArdRi79 on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:04:44 PM AEST
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A nice vindicating poem, it was apleasure to read.

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