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Dying Again
Contributed by
bleedingXrose
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 10:53:57 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Inside my heart, theres this hole
It's the part that you stole
You took this part and smashed it hard
Left me with nothing, left me scarred
I know that life, it's never fair
But you said, you'd always be there
I didn't think you would leave me
This isn't how it's suppose to be
I thought you would love me forever
I thought that we would stay together
But I'm by myself, all alone
Dying again, on my own
Soon I'll be gone, I'll be dead
Because of something that you said
My love for you will stay true
But without you, I won't make it through
Copyright ©
bleedingXrose
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2003-11-27 10:53:57]
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Re: Dying Again
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by Aika on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:34:44 AM AEST
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OOOOOOOHHH!! so sad:-((
BUt wonderful writing, excellent I have to say!!!! Keep writing,.. but wishing you more love and luck in your life, love aika:-)
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Re: Dying Again
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by faffeee on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:41:30 PM AEST
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| yes so sad :( lovely writing but very sad, i hpoe things get better :) xxx |
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Re: Dying Again
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 04:24:14 PM AEST
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Written with such feelings.... Hope things work out for you...
Hugs
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