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Forever
Contributed by
Demon
on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 08:40:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Forever mourning the loss of a life
Forever seeking the other half to our souls
Forever being something we are not
Forever seeing our faith disolve
Forever induldging in our sins
Forever a persistant heart beats
Forever succumb to temptation
Forever admitting defeat
Forever attempting to cease existance
Forever getting less
Forever an endless isolation
Forever an empty loneliness
Forever watching loved ones cry
Forever feeling this agony and pain
Forever lusting for this hatred
Forever in my body rains
Forever knowing the absence of love
Forever feeling to this world,blind
Forever knowing it's all perished
Forever nothing left to find
Forever living the hope in a dream
Forever feeling the hurt of the heart
Forever living this life we lead
Forever beginning back at the start
Forever watching love pass you by
Forever searching for that key
Forever losing clear vision
Forever seeking some sort of serenity
Forever regretting what was said
Forever searching for the one thing
Forever not finding
Forever the sadness it brings
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Demon
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2002-08-26 20:40:17]
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Re: Forever
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by Tahlia on
Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 10:56:05 PM AEST
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| I Like this Structure,but i must say your Life poem is one of my favourites.Always a good read Keep up the good work! |
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Re: Forever
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 03:11:35 AM AEST
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This is amazing...it totally spoke to me. A few of the lines in particular really stood out to me because I could take them in a very personal way, yet this poem is so personally yours. I love it! Great job!
~ MoonlitAngel |
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Re: Forever
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 06:52:31 AM AEST
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Hey, I liked this poem. I could relate a lot to a few of the lines because suicide and depression is something I have struggled with. I know it can be hard at times, but we just have to fight on.
- bobo |
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