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Sunflowers
Contributed by
Crimsonflame
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:36:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Sunflowers waving in the wind,
Facing down with a flourish bloom,
I wish I could reflect such courage,
Just as my face such troubles.
I remember that day,
When he came home with a tired face,
She went to him with a smile,
As bright as the sunflowers he thrust to her.
Sunflowers that light up my life,
The love they shared in these yellow petals,
Still blooms after years and years,
Of household love and parenthood days.
Mother and father,
How you love those flowers,
Here I am carrying them for you,
But it's all too late now,
For they just fall back to the earth to meet you.
Copyright ©
Crimsonflame
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2003-11-27 02:36:52]
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Re: Sunflowers
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:47:13 AM AEST
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This is a GREAT peom, congrats on writing it, it has a range of emotions and I was feeling good until the last two lines,
well written. |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by EternitysLyre on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 04:44:57 AM AEST
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| Meaningful. Poetic, no doubt. Keep it up; i anticipate your next work. |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 07:02:19 AM AEST
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Beautiful write....Welcome to your-poetry.com...
Jenni |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 10:09:28 AM AEST
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| First off, I love your name "Crimsonflame". Your poem is wonderful. Very heartwarming and it flows very well. Can't wait to read more of your work. Welcome to the site.........Mike |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:31:11 PM AEST
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| aww such a sad poem but yet beutiful you have a definate talent |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by Kie on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 04:40:38 PM AEST
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I so enjoy poetry from the heart. I also love sunflowers and the way they bend & twist to sun themselves during the day. You reminded me of this. Thank-you
Kie |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by nEuRoPsYcHo on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 11:22:39 PM AEST
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well...
i do like ur poem...
it's really nice...
keep up ur good work...
n i'm hopin 2 c more of ur works in the future...
=) |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by rockstarr12747 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:09:25 AM AEST
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i am sorry about your parents but i loved your poem before the last two lines it was great keep it up
Crystal |
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Re: Sunflowers
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by Wachumiri on
Tuesday, 1st November 2005 @ 06:07:19 AM AEST
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I love the way sadness is just thrown at the reader in the last lines. Well put. It gives the poem so much power.
Take care.
David |
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