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broken heart
Contributed by
tWiStEd
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Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:18:51 AM in AEST
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i thought ive been there for you
i thought i made you smile
i thought i made you happy
i thought i made you feel special
i thought i made you a better man
but i have been wrong...
'cause you said "but you just aren't here for me...i can't call you or tell you something"
"i feel safe when i talk to her.."
that made my heart broken.
that made me felt it was over
that made me see the pain i did to you
that made me forget all those promises
now i know that nothing will ever be the same again.
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Re: broken heart
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:49:30 AM AEST
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| a well structured poem and a sad one |
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Re: broken heart
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:38:13 AM AEST
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Words can hurt a great deal...and things will never be the same, if so it'll take time. Thanks for sharing. Take care.
Emma. |
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Re: broken heart
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:27:34 PM AEST
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| ....awww im trully sorry.....but its him who's going to feel bad when he relizes how wrong and stupid he is but by then u wld of moved on to somone as specail as you are and you wont even rember he exsisted |
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Re: broken heart
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:15:25 AM AEST
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| I went through this on the opposite side... I do apolagize to you I'm not sure how hard that is. I still liked the poem though. |
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Re: broken heart
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by garyh on
Saturday, 21st August 2004 @ 03:40:13 AM AEST
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| Great write... I just wish it wasn't about me. |
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Re: broken heart
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by HellsLibrarian on
Sunday, 10th October 2004 @ 09:45:48 AM AEST
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| nice use of the lowercase i's. |
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Re: broken heart
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by Live2Die on
Tuesday, 19th October 2004 @ 04:16:04 PM AEST
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Great poem..I really like it. Its sad, yet good. And the guy who did that, haha he'll realize how stupid he was soon enough. Then you'll be the one laughing, because you'll have someone as great as you, who reallu understands you.
~ Younger yet Older |
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Re: broken heart
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by Starlilly on
Monday, 1st November 2004 @ 12:00:19 AM AEST
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Well written and to the point
Sad and heartbreaking |
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Re: broken heart
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by midian on
Thursday, 4th November 2004 @ 10:22:39 PM AEST
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| what a beautifal poem.. i love its mournful tone and Dont Worry You dont need a man to be happy! |
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Re: broken heart
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by momentoftruth on
Monday, 15th November 2004 @ 05:16:21 PM AEST
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| Exactly how I feel. Wonderful. |
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Re: broken heart
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by Bikeichou on
Saturday, 27th November 2004 @ 04:41:22 AM AEST
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| i think u expressed urself nicely |
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Re: broken heart
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by Rottenrioter on
Monday, 27th December 2004 @ 11:23:07 PM AEST
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| wow strong stuff |
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Re: broken heart
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by fielding88 on
Tuesday, 18th January 2005 @ 04:06:03 PM AEST
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| This was touching. You pretty much said all you needed to with that first line. I dunno wat else to say, i could never write something like this, and the way in which you wrote it just made it that much better. Really great. |
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Re: broken heart
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by ruthie1983 on
Saturday, 5th February 2005 @ 01:09:54 AM AEST
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| i like your rhyming because it expresses your thinking. |
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Re: broken heart
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by heartbroken4ever on
Wednesday, 9th February 2005 @ 06:26:07 PM AEST
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its so sad but yet i've been through the same thing.
amber |
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Re: broken heart
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by ruthie1983 on
Friday, 11th February 2005 @ 01:24:55 AM AEST
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| All of us can relate to your poem. Great poem |
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Re: broken heart
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by xXcrossedXx on
Sunday, 13th February 2005 @ 12:56:29 PM AEST
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| good poem and feeling. |
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Re: broken heart
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by rockstarr12747 on
Tuesday, 1st March 2005 @ 01:06:31 AM AEST
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i used to think guys were everything but now iam single and i am lovin it i liked your poem but just a hint a guy is not worth the tears you cry
Crystal |
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by ihopeyouchokex on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 01:20:39 PM AEST
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| amazing,truly amazing |
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Re: broken heart
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by c2b6s on
Tuesday, 7th June 2005 @ 07:52:19 PM AEST
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| Thank you for writing this. It actually made me cry b/c i am going through the exact same thing. The way you say everything so bluntly and honestly is really inspiring. It is everything i wish i could say to my guy but i couldn't ever find the right words. Great poem, really touching. Its nice to know that i am not alone in the way i am feeling |
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by Tricky on
Thursday, 21st July 2005 @ 11:54:15 PM AEST
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| It makes me think of my ex. Powerful meanings........awesome job. |
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by xthrewmyluvawayx on
Sunday, 31st July 2005 @ 02:42:17 AM AEST
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| aww im soo sorry if this is true...it was good though.... |
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by ruthie1983 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 01:20:33 PM AEST
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| I like this one cuz i can relate. Good job! |
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Re: broken heart
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by Mikayla on
Sunday, 4th September 2005 @ 04:41:45 PM AEST
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I voted a 5 for your poem.
I see 34 people voted and your average is
2.94
I think maybe cause you didnt rhyme
that doesnt make a difference
poems dont have to rhyme to be special
they just have to be true and straight from your heart.
great job and hang in there!
*Mikayla* - Rebelious_Butterfly! |
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by Lollypopxcore on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 02:04:50 AM AEST
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| the same thing just happened to me like 3 days ago. And i know it hurts. |
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Re: broken heart
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by jheng on
Sunday, 9th October 2005 @ 05:16:21 AM AEST
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nice poem. i hope you'll get over him soon |
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Re: broken heart
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by poetrygirl1991 on
Saturday, 15th October 2005 @ 09:27:35 PM AEST
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| nice way to xpress your feelings i think every1 goes through a similar situation in their life...at least i know i have...tears...nice poem though keep wriiting...great way to express yourself...~Chrissy |
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by brokenwings on
Monday, 17th October 2005 @ 02:48:08 AM AEST
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| nice write |
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Re: broken heart
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by candysears on
Wednesday, 26th October 2005 @ 07:02:28 PM AEST
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| Very powerful.....Nice write.....God Bless! |
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by MajesticPoet on
Wednesday, 2nd November 2005 @ 01:20:52 PM AEST
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Great write. I love this one!
MaJ |
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 13th December 2005 @ 10:24:43 PM AEST
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| awwwwww so sad .. nice write |
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th December 2005 @ 01:13:06 PM AEST
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| an honest write but a poor one. |
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by from_first_to_last on
Friday, 27th January 2006 @ 04:45:45 PM AEST
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awwww thats really sad but its a great poem.ya i feel that way about a guy in my school.
luv skittles |
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Re: broken heart
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by whiteleo1984 on
Wednesday, 8th March 2006 @ 12:56:48 PM AEST
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| very heartfelt, i feel your pain... love 2 read more from you. |
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Re: broken heart
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by CaddishCut on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 05:57:04 PM AEST
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| Brilliantly put |
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by GAMEchief on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 05:47:55 PM AEST
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| I'm sorry you had to go through all that. I feel your pain. |
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by New_York_Chick on
Monday, 16th April 2007 @ 06:46:55 AM AEST
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hope u feel better!!
this was very well written |
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by missyboo on
Thursday, 18th October 2007 @ 12:44:35 AM AEST
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| my hearts been broken a like the poem is true things happen read the poem the cards of a player its nice my favorite rate it this may be my internet love its in the m section |
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by texasw97 on
Wednesday, 25th June 2008 @ 10:02:06 PM AEST
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| Hey. This is good. |
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by ribbons_and_lace09 on
Tuesday, 29th July 2008 @ 08:43:27 AM AEST
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i can relate to you on that. it hurts when someone you care about does that to you. you did a very good job writing this. i enjoyed it. :)
always,
megan |
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th December 2008 @ 04:29:09 PM AEST
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so so sad, but good.
-phil |
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by djs on
Sunday, 28th December 2008 @ 09:47:29 AM AEST
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| this is a very gripping poem. i liked it a lot. great work. |
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by secretcelebrity on
Thursday, 11th June 2009 @ 08:11:45 AM AEST
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Hey, you posted this a long time ago but at the moment I feel exactly how you felt then. I just want to read poems exactly like this, you really get across how you feel :)
thank you |
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by keela12 on
Wednesday, 28th April 2010 @ 04:46:16 PM AEST
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| nice poem (dont study some people u dont have to rhyme ) but describe ur feelings more |
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by jelly-baby on
Sunday, 20th June 2010 @ 06:47:25 AM AEST
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| such pain expressed so beautifully - a heartfelt piece |
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by Punkrocknemo on
Friday, 27th August 2010 @ 12:24:33 PM AEST
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| pretty good write. I can feel your emotion and im so sorrie for your lost. My blessings are with you. ~Jessica~ |
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by CarrieLindeman on
Thursday, 16th September 2010 @ 05:33:20 PM AEST
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| Deep and thoughtful. I like it |
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by nachi1981 on
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| very well written... |
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