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pointless?
Contributed by
rain
on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:00:42 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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pointless you say
obviously you've never felt pain
and obviously you've never lived
tears are ones exspresion of feeling weither sadness or pain or happyness
sometimes however tears are viewed
as merely weakness
then tears no longer fall and ways of expresion change
blood spills as pain is felt
blood falls in tears absince
and when neither blood nor tears fall
death comes to claim all
in truth poetry can be short and
sometimes even seemingly pointless
in an effort to make one think
think about the message
behind the pointless exsterier.
Copyright ©
rain
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2003-11-27 02:00:42]
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Re: pointless?
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:21:40 AM AEST
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Interesting...
Emma. |
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Re: pointless?
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by MoonlitAngel on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 05:13:51 PM AEST
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Ok I am SO bookmarking this and showing it to my boyfriend!! He'd understand me so much better if he read this - and actually took some time to think about it, of course. Thank you for writing this!!
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Re: pointless?
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 11:06:49 AM AEST
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| This was interesting and I liked it. |
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