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Dreams
Contributed by
hazelnut
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:14:06 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Shimmering mists
Enfold the world of fantasies
Heavenly music drifts
In a realm where no sands of time sift
A floating sensation hard to resist
Enraptured by the beauty of this
enchantment, the bliss
Of fulfilling the Wish
Something so tangible, and yet, set amidst
Surrealism
Of untold secrets, castles in the air, that perfect kiss
Dreams are made of these
Copyright ©
hazelnut
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2003-11-26 23:14:06]
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Re: Dreams
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:20:54 AM AEST
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Great write.. your use of imagery is really something of its own here, if only some of us could go to that place all the time then maybe we wouldnt be so scornful ... i love the penultimate line untold secrets, castles in the air, that perfect kiss truely these are things dreams are made of.... nice write :)
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Re: Dreams
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by Aika on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:07:55 PM AEST
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I wish your dreams came true!
Wonderful writing! love, aika:-) |
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Re: Dreams
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 02:41:22 AM AEST
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Y'know, you got really nice expressions for words. And you use good words to express your expression.
That will only make sense if you read it twice or even more
-Teah |
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