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hell and parents
Contributed by
saddarkgirlreingsthenight
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 09:26:29 PM in AEST
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why?
why does it hurt so bad,
to tell one person but not the next.
is it because i trust that person, not u.
you deny it cause u don't know me.
why do u torture me?
i'm not the girl u think i am,
i am far from it.
i have mastered the art of having a mask and few people can break through it.
i think i just might give up on life,
because there is no point in living.
life is hell
end of story
so should i just end my life?
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Re: hell and parents
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by PsychoticDreamz on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 10:08:14 PM AEST
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Great write. I've been here before, and not to sound like just another person..but...You shouldn't end your life. True, I do not know you, and death could seem the best choice, but like I said, I've seen those days..well..years..and still visit them. You have a lovely talent and this should not be your last poem, or one of your final writes, or even near it. Sorry for my rambling, but messege me if you wish, or dont. That is up to you fully. I just wish others wouldnt make the mistake that I nearly did, is all.
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Re: hell and parents
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by hazelnut on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:29:50 PM AEST
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i have been depressed, yes, thought about dying...and yet, death is so fearful.
reach out to the "few people that can break through your mask" i'm sure there are people around who care. |
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Re: hell and parents
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by ShadowDaughter on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:30:16 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem.
I agree completely with what PschoticDreamz says. I wish I could tell you I know how you feel. I don't. I've certainly contemplated suicide before-- more than contemplated-- but the situation, the burden, it's all different for each person. I fully realize just how little it means for me, a random stranger, to say I really hope you don't choose to end your life. I don't know you, I'll never know you, but it doesn't really matter. I wouldn't try to guilt you into staying alive if you honestly saw death as your only option, but listen: the other day, I came across 'teardrops'. Yeah, I know, I didn't comment, but it impressed/touched/interested me so much that i went and read all of your poems. I liked them. I liked them a lot. My point is, your life touches everyone else's in a million different ways, no matter how lame it sounds. People and lives are different for you being here. If you were to end that, well . . . I'd miss your poetry a lot. You're welcome to PM me-- I don't know about you, but I've found it's often easier to tell things to a stranger, someone who doesn't know you and won't judge you.
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Re: hell and parents
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:29:33 AM AEST
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Amazing write you truely have a talent, as for the question in hand.... i too have been in a similar situation, maybe not for the same reasons but wanting to go to the same place, and personally now.. i have to agree with everyone above me, it may feel lie the best way, maybe even the right, but i tell you.. it isnt and god i know i still go there sometimes today and jusy think.. would anyone care... and i founf that someone would, someone broke my mask, and well, what i say is if in this one poem you've touched four strangers, then who can you touch near you... great write and i hope to see more :)
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Re: hell and parents
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by Cobalt on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 01:07:30 AM AEST
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| No, you shouldn't end it. It will end on it's own when it is time. Granted it is sometimes harder to live than to drag that knife those few inches. Don't do it though. I am going to say this and it might be different for you... What about those you might destroy by killing yourself? Even if you think there is no one you never know how you might have touched anothers life. Might have given them hope to live. How you might be able to inspire hope in others. |
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Re: hell and parents
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by TaintedOptomist on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:09:42 AM AEST
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great write reminds me of some of my early stuff, i have no clue why your depression is so great, because i obviously don't know you, but that is beside the point. i have a theory that generally people could care less about the welfare of strangers, so i won't lie to you and say i nesisarily care about you personaly yet because i don't know you yet, but that was a great write and i would like to see more and with you dead... that won't happen. i go in and out of the suicidal fits and it makes for great writes and different out look son the world. anyway i may be too late i may not you may not even take notice to my post but i said what i thought and i hope to see more poetry of yours.
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Re: hell and parents
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 02:23:12 AM AEST
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This is why I never talk to my parents....
But life doesn't need to end here just because of that. I'm having some issues myself and trust me, it's pretty tempting sometimes to pick up that blade and bid the world goodbye. But there's always that instinct that makes me resist because I know there's something more for me and I have to find it...maybe it's a bit confusing but, my answer to your last line is, DON't. |
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