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Wails
Contributed by
sindi-selde
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 08:55:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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the hired wails of the mourners turn real
as the whips lash their backs.
the sound echoes off marble walls and marble hearts.
they scream shrilly
as they are entered from behind.
the men laugh and beat them feircly.
and enter them the same.
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sindi-selde
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2003-11-26 20:55:16]
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Re: Wails
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by ArdRi79 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 03:57:15 AM AEST
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this is an EXCELLENT poem, im used to this kinda stuff and it hit me HARD, you gotta tell me what this is about....pleeeeeease.
the imagery you used is awesome
"the sound echoes off marble walls and marble hearts."
the way you worded this gives it extra impact. |
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Re: Wails
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by EmSal on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:45:39 AM AEST
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Interesting...
Emma. |
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Re: Wails
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by gohar on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 12:59:36 PM AEST
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Exceptionally beautiful poem. Very expressive
thought.
Greetings from Atlanta.
Ashraf Gohar Goreja.
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