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Behold The Beast
Contributed by
doug
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:10:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
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behold the beast thats in your head
feeds on you when your alone
digs your grave and knaws your bones
tells you hope is dead
behold the beast with blackish eyes
in your head a voice unkind
tells you you've been left behind
when all your friends have fled
behold the beast that laughs at you
tells you that your worthless too
you'll never find a love thats true
so the beast fortells
behold the beast thats in your head
depression is its rightful name
tells you your the one to blame
for being here in hell
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doug
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2003-11-26 16:10:29]
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Re: Behold The Beast
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:21:42 PM AEST
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Hi doug
depression sucks
good poem tho
your friend michelle |
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Re: Behold The Beast
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by mckayla on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 05:36:35 PM AEST
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I hate being depressed. You really put a picture to depression, great job!
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Re: Behold The Beast
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by Razor_Blade_Kisses on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 05:37:07 PM AEST
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| great poem!!!!!!!!!! it was very real, its hard to describe what im trying to say so umm, im just gonna say AWESOME |
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Re: Behold The Beast
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 07:23:51 PM AEST
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I love the dark writes....and this is a good one. I know this beast well my friend.
Well done
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Re: Behold The Beast
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:18:18 PM AEST
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Great description, Doug....
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