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Only in rhythm
Contributed by
Demon_of_Blood
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:02:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I can feel the music speak to me, sitting on my throne.
It combines with me and aligns with me, it surges in my bones.
Thrashing and flailing, convulsing as it seems. But all of the music would have no pulse if it weren't for me and my rhythmic dreams.
So only in rhythm do you dance and do you sing. Because behind my fortress of wood and metal, Only I reign supreme.
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2003-11-26 16:02:24]
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Re: Only in rhythm
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:08:54 PM AEST
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Naw, I don't think it's "gay" as you say it is.... I think it's got a great thought behind the writing. Expressed well too. A fine write.
God bless,
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Re: Only in rhythm
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:26:01 PM AEST
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um yah what she said
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Re: Only in rhythm
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by Medieval_Enigma on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:32:35 PM AEST
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Hmm yeah this poem is so gay, I can't believe you wrote this baby j/k lol it's not GAY!!!! now I know how u feel when u play the drums...He he
LOVE always LuCy |
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Re: Only in rhythm
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by SuicidalSon on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:47:50 PM AEST
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Only in rythym you cant play the drums
Somebody hit him this boy is pure dumb
Hitting his symbols and riding his snare
Theres more talent in pimples than hes got to spare
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