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One Prize Per Customer
Contributed by
norticus
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:48:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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I met her at the bar, I did. I did.
I met her at the bar, but I have a kid.
She sat in box seats & I on the stage.
She held a drink & I had baggage.
Never could I love you, she said. She said.
Never could I love you; why not drop dead?
She held the hammer & I had a nail.
She swung down & I went pale.
Went to the dance floor with someone else.
Went to the dance floor I'm by myself.
She had my heart & gave it to him.
His name was Joe; my name is Jim.
I met her at the bar, I did. I did.
I met her at a bar. Now I'm home with my kid.
jz
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Re: One Prize Per Customer
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by doug on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 07:43:17 PM AEST
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a nice poem, keep em coming
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Re: One Prize Per Customer
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by Merry on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 05:41:15 PM AEST
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have we all been to that bar at one time or another? clever write - hiding pain behind sly humor - nice treatment. it's tough getting out there and trying to start again -
"the searching for one thing will find another"
merry
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