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Dandy
Contributed by
saddarkgirlreingsthenight
on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:18:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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Why did you have to leave me?
On a hard cold day?
Leave me on this cruel world,
alone and lost.
Why did you have to leave me,
without saying goodbye.
I thought you would be here longer.
I need you a lot these days.
But now I another in my life.
But it's not the same.
I still miss you everyday.
The pain I don't think will ever go away,
you will recide in my heart forever.
You were my best friend,
and you left when I
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2003-11-26 15:18:30]
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Re: Dandy
(User Rating: 1 )
by norticus on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:54:16 PM AEST
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When you what? Since there's no ending to that I am just going to assume that he left when you farted in church embarrassing you and him. He just didn't want to be seen with you after that. That's what I'll assume.
I give the poem a 3 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: Dandy
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by doug on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 07:48:58 PM AEST
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pay no heed to the above comment, that was
rude and this was a very good poem
please write more your friend doug |
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