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Difference
Contributed by
Eve
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:10:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Call me a fool,
Call me a genius,
Whatever you think is true,
That's what it must.
Existentialism: The choice.
Say that I'm nothing,
Say I'm unforgiven,
It doesn't even matter,
For we are all forsaken.
Atheism: The disbelief.
Voice that I'm an animal,
Voice I'll grow a brain someday,
Whatever I am isn't my fault,
We're getting smarter now anyway.
Evolutionism: The proven.
Tell me that I'm everything,
Tell me I'm forgiven,
Something better has to happen,
To a higher cause we must be driven.
Religion: The belief.
Maybe you're one thing,
Maybe you're not,
Maybe you'll live forever,
Maybe you'll rot.
Agnosticism: The doubt.
Copyright ©
Eve
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2003-11-26 15:10:08]
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Re: Difference
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by Putteragain on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:44:00 PM AEST
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this was great
i loved it
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Re: Difference
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by norticus on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:58:32 PM AEST
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Evolution is proven? I thought it was still a theory... pish posh who cares. Deep attempt here.
I give this a 3.4 on the Nortiscale.
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Re: Difference
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:19:29 AM AEST
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| Perfectly written and just insanely deep. I catch something new every time I read it. Definitlely a five. |
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Re: Difference
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by Eve on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 01:39:23 AM AEST
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| Norticus: The 'proven' thing was sarcasm. I don't think it's proven at all, but this poem is imagining these particular views. |
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