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Unafraid
Contributed by
Eve
on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:24:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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Unafraid
Is a mask
I see your red roses
Turning black
Tell me that
You don't think
I would ever
Let you sink?
Making sense
Of these ryhmes?
You won't, so don't
Waste your time.
I see your confidence
Beginning to fade
What ever happened to your
Unafraid?
Copyright ©
Eve
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2003-11-26 14:24:17]
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Re: Unafraid
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by Cobalt on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:30:41 PM AEST
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| I doubt I fully understood but I still thought it was pretty good. Don't need to understand something to enjoy it though. |
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Re: Unafraid
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by Eve on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:02:00 PM AEST
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| Thanks. =D |
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Re: Unafraid
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:51:27 PM AEST
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| i did understand but it is obvious their are so many of your feeling in their nobody but you can understand its amazing how ppl manage to write such brillant poetry in so many little words.....good for you......you are strong |
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Re: Unafraid
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:26:57 AM AEST
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I understand to a point, but the beauty of it lies in the fact that everybody will draw a different feeling from it. Such talent...
Incredible work, Eve! I bow before thee... |
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Re: Unafraid
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by Rhei76 on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 02:05:42 PM AEST
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sad is the harbor
that homes this dark port
freedom is a state of mind
but in that court
i'd forgotten the time
so sadness is a cloud
that carries muse
infractured was the boy
but no longer will he destroy
this coming from one who can
understand and answer back.
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