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Candle
Contributed by
CodyJ
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:31:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I hear the noise.
Hear it pulsing,writhing, coarsing.
Living.
The rage the anger and the bitter bile.
I can feel in drag me down.
Pulling me into the fiery hell,
a blasting inferno roasting my soul,
a hell created by my own sick perversions.
Or the perversions of others.
I am slaughtered.
My innocence has been butchered.
Cut up and sold to the cynical,
the ones who take pleasure in the flesh.
They all want a piece.
Want me to be there, to be cold comfort.
Want to drain me and transfigure me.
Turn me into them.
I cry.
And I cry.
And I am dust.
Another victim.
Another nice guy.
Left alone.
Another light burning out in a dark world.
Copyright ©
CodyJ
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2003-11-26 11:31:05]
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Re: Candle
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by garyh on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:31:57 PM AEST
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| very nice write... it reminds me of a friend of mines poem... |
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Re: Candle
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by Ldy_Tryst_Vampyrre on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 03:50:12 PM AEST
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such imagery!!!!!!
the feeling is so strong throughout it that you are just engulfed!
i almost cried.....
keep writing and blessed be.!!
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