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The rain tears
Contributed by
M
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:22:22 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Pouring my soul out through my mind,
Walking, no direction, just following the signs.
I wrote them myself, positioned them myself.
And i know where they end up.
Cuts and burns and pride and hate,
My recipe, my map to death.
This self-destruction path i'm on,
I can not stop, i will not rest.
Walking the deserted frozen streets,
All alone, there's no one to meet.
It's not that they hate me,
It's just that i hate myself.
All alone, but the streets are suddenly full.
Am i still in the place i was before?
These people have always been there,
We just don't notice eachother anymore.
The sky begins to cry,
Beautiful raindrop tears fill my eyes.
And slowly, second by second i continue to die,
And my sky turns black, and their sun begins to shine.
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M
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2003-11-26 11:22:22]
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Re: The rain tears
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:57:27 PM AEST
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Words cannot express how awesome this was... You say I have talent, but everything I write pales in comparison to this. This was brilliant. The last stanza wow... I can't say enough.
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Re: The rain tears
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by garyh on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 06:29:24 PM AEST
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| very sad... but also a very good poem... |
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Re: The rain tears
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by wyrd_faerie on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 05:47:29 PM AEST
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| you know how much i love this...one of the best things you've written...it's so beautiful... |
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Re: The rain tears
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by afraid_of_fear on
Sunday, 14th December 2003 @ 04:28:51 PM AEST
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i dont know what to say.. the poem is beautiful, as are you.. love you hun..
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