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A Warped Moment
Contributed by
CrystalSilence
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:56:05 AM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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your the icing on my cake,.. in my memory a flash,
this is not really...me, i love you so much, secret love?
so many tears, forever. Good by my friends,forever
leaving in open cages., afar away I remember, afraid
stay ananymous so a dead iraqi can`t celebrate.. children
with prosthetic limbs tease me. yes tease! and forever.
this doesn`t mean a thing, Hi! everyone! just a crooked letter.
no topic, someone ...there? please..mom don`t cry just.. whisper,
this chapter is now over. myself? the walls are melting... dear mama
my best friends,.. withered brown eyes see a Ghost on the wall. Dreams
of ghosts, I miss you forever, now.. dress in black...you might hear... the orgasm zone.
Am I a fool? such...scar tissue, late..the afternoon sun...Seamus... the dog won`t bite!....
rejoice!!
a...displacement..and I am free.... majesty of desire...not in my dream...but remember,
..along came a spider... ..hate to tell you...just listen to the....music
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I'd like to thank everyone for their contribution to my first post LMAO
Seriously though..no insult intended :)
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CrystalSilence
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2003-11-26 03:56:05]
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Re: A Warped Moment
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:04:33 AM AEST
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LOL well I'm proud to have contributed to such a unique and interesting piece of work! Though I must say..... bored much?? LOL. You did it well though, it's a difficult thing to do and it turned out well. I applaud you!!
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Re: A Warped Moment
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:28:27 AM AEST
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| lol wow what a cool poem it was really fun to read an an excellent idea well done |
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Re: A Warped Moment
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by harshreality on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:13:14 AM AEST
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| very unique. it had to take alot of effort, its hard to make actual titles flow like that, but it worked well for you. |
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Re: A Warped Moment
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 09:04:34 AM AEST
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lol...strangely enough this makes more sense then some of the other poems I read here....scary huh? lmao
Welcome to ypdc! :o)
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Re: A Warped Moment
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 08:55:09 PM AEST
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A sense of humor too!! I know it's love now. Please don't tell me you can cook. lol
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