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your the icing on my cake
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:25:34 AM in AEST
Topic:
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your always there whenever i need you
genuine, caring, loving, honest and true,
your the one who gently guides my way
and you always know the right thing to say,
no troubles seem too big when your around
you keep my feet planted fimly on the ground,
and no matter the revolving changing season
your always my minds voice of calm reason,
you believe in me and all my various goals
your the beautiful reflection upon my soul,
to me you are the brightest of bright stars
thank you for being who you are!
your devotion never takes a break
to me; your the icing on my cake:)
*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*°´°*ø,¸¸,ø*
xOx...
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:58:02 AM AEST
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Hehe that's sweet! Very cute way of looking at it. Mmm, cake.........
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by venkat on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:04:00 AM AEST
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"you are the brightest of bright stars"..
Aww.. thats a good description.. you are also bright star..best of luck. hugs..venkat
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by loopylou on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 04:33:19 AM AEST
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| aww....how lucky you are to have somone like this around aww....how lucky they are to be so valued by somone like you.......really sweet.....really lucky |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 06:48:09 AM AEST
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Awww this is so sweet, Ness...(Cake always is..:>) ) I enjoyed this very much..
P/S...your should be you're...hehehe couldn't resist..
Luv and huggs....
Jenni |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 09:05:52 AM AEST
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| Wonderful poem, it's smooth and creamy, like cake. |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Ilhar on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 10:03:45 AM AEST
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good write...enjoyable read
Shari |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Lone_er on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 09:27:52 PM AEST
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| A beautiful tribute and wonderful expression of love.--Russ |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Bongo on
Friday, 28th November 2003 @ 10:11:20 AM AEST
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Your words are so very kind
In my life you are my best find
And with our minds, hearts and souls together too
I cannot picture my life without you
A meaningful life we now can make
For your too, the icing on my cake . |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by blueheart on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 12:52:33 AM AEST
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| Really romantic. :) |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by secretwind on
Tuesday, 2nd December 2003 @ 08:27:10 PM AEST
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WELL DONE NON CAN COMPARE TO YOU
YOUR FLOWS GO WHERE MINE CAN ONLY HOPE TO DREAM OF. |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Cynthia on
Sunday, 4th January 2004 @ 09:49:57 PM AEST
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HEHE This is a sweet write Ladyfawn.
It's a beautiful write.
*S* Cynthia |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by Sinned on
Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 01:04:38 AM AEST
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ladyfawn
Cute-real-cute
To your friend nice tribute
Friendship is a form of love-this is true
Your friend so lucky
to have a friend in you
Sinned |
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Re: your the icing on my cake
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 01:07:07 PM AEST
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Now Nessa, why did you go and write a poem about yourself? ;) This is such a sweet friendship poem, and it made me think of how special you are around here.
Hugs
~Scorp |
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