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...and Forever
Contributed by
SensitiveSoAbused
on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 08:33:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Confusion,
an Intrusion, a
Deluge, in
this world, there is only one
way to remain pure
And I’m sure…
I don’t know what it is…
but what it is I know
is so Wondrous
You, I,
and Us
something I cannot deal with,
or understand
seal this, at my command
and walk away,
today, and forever
or I find you will never.
Leave me be.
Copyright ©
SensitiveSoAbused
... [
2003-11-25 20:33:11]
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Re: ...and Forever
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 08:40:16 PM AEST
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I really liked the way this flowed. Good Write!!
Diana
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Re: ...and Forever
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:03:51 PM AEST
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never seen/heard this one before buddy. Good job!!!! Written in classic Lane style!
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Re: ...and Forever
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by MoonlitAngel on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:05:45 AM AEST
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this world, there is only one
way to remain pure
And I’m sure…
I LOVE that part!! Don't know what it is about it, it just sounds awesome in my head. Great write, I like your style! Very captivating.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: ...and Forever
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by Dusty on
Wednesday, 21st July 2004 @ 07:14:54 PM AEST
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Well written. Flowed well. I like.
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