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Whisper
Contributed by
Breezer08
on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:02:05 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The wind whispers your name in my ear
Warming me with it's breeze
Telling me there is nothing to fear
As I fall down onto my knees
The blood runs from my chest
Staining my white clothes
I whisper "God, I'm coming home to your nest."
But he already knows
My body becomes numb
As I slip into black silence
No more put downs or feeling dumb
No more nervousness or being tense
Just total relaxation
Like all the pain in the world is gone
I feel no more temptation
Just being happy to sing my song
And one last thing I hear before I go
Like it was ment to be
I hear the wind whisper your name
Or was that just me?
Copyright ©
Breezer08
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2003-11-25 19:02:05]
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Re: Whisper
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:05:38 PM AEST
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Good work so u r safe.
peace, joy, luv,
emy |
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Re: Whisper
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:12:37 PM AEST
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| this has a final haunting feel to it.......good job!!!! no need to be killed :) |
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