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The Walls are melting...
Contributed by
secretwind
on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 05:59:24 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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THE GHOST OF YOU
IS HAUNTING
AS THE CRIPPLED PILGRIMS
DANCE AND SING
THOUGHTS ABOUT YOU
ARE TAKING ME
DEEP...
WE ADVENTURE INTO PLEASURE
OH SO SLOWLY DRIFTING
INNERVISIONS
FLOW AND FORM A SEA.
FANTASTIC IS THE FEELING
WHEN THERE'S LOVE ALL AROUND
SENSATIONS
ARE OH SO STRONG,
THE WALLS ARE MELTING
TALKING HEADS MAKE NO SOUND
THOUGHTS ABOUT YOU
ARE KEEPING ME WARM.
Copyright ©
secretwind
... [
2003-11-25 17:59:24]
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Re: The Walls are melting...
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:18:58 PM AEST
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| interesting.......very intense.......i like that!!! |
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Re: The Walls are melting...
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by Jellybellyprincess on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 03:58:37 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking.... great work =)
It doesn't make sense in a normal way, but it's abstract in a way.... Very unique.
Awesome job on the poem. Best wishes for you two ; )
God bless,
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Re: The Walls are melting...
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st January 2004 @ 06:12:34 AM AEST
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Another good one.
luv, hugs,
emy |
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