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Miss you forever
Contributed by
brokenwings
on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 04:55:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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we met and you made me complete.
we loved and you made me feel real.
we cried after the big fight
we kissed, made love, till dawn's first light.
you showed me love like none before.
you held me so tight, i couldn't ask for more.
you made my life better, you made me heal,
now with out you i can't deal...
i wasn't ready the day i got the call.
could i move not at all.
my legs were like rubber,
my heart turned to glass..
The man's voice played in my head
I drove so fast, remembering the past
how was i to know love wouldn't last...
i wil miss you until the day i die..
i will miss you till the end..
you my best friend
All they said was you had a fall
I wasn't ready for what i saw.
you laid there lifeless,
your hands were as cold as ice...
The nurses so ------- nice.
Nothing good was expected i was a mess.
This was loves final test.
I know I had to be strong,
yet i was hard they had to be wrong.
One year ago today.
i held your hand as you slipped away,
Slowly even more each passing day,
Fighting all the while,
your longest yet final mile.
i will miss you forever...
my life has a chance....
in my dreams each night we shall dance,
until we are joined again
for death does not say when love ends,
Copyright ©
brokenwings
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2003-11-25 16:55:52]
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Re: Miss you forever
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by Kirby on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 04:59:47 PM AEST
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| I am deeply sorry for youe loss! Your poem was so emotional and real that it made me cry and feel like it was me in the poem. Great write and true love will appear again! Love:::Kirby |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by misstressdistrubed on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 05:46:35 PM AEST
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| oh so good, i think i might cry, you put alot of emtion in it and that made it even better, thanks for shareing i know its hard to, good write -jennifer |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by jaeann on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:16:55 PM AEST
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| your emotions must have poured out for you when writing this......a beautiful tribute......actually......my favorite line is about the nurses......... too true........i've lost also.........and you put that experience on the paper so well..........my thoughts will include you my friend....... |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:34:52 PM AEST
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I'm so sorry for your loss.
Very sad but really written well.
Hang in there and keep writing!
peace, joy, luv, healing,
emy |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by harshreality on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:51:58 PM AEST
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| this is the saddest thing I've ever read. I can't tell you how sorry I am. I hope peace of mind finds you. |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by positivelypurple on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 01:43:25 AM AEST
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| This one ripped my heart out! So powerful and deeply sad. So sorry for your loss! |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by M on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 11:51:43 AM AEST
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This is amazing, and beautifully written. It's brought me to tears. I'm so sorry for your loss, but this person has not been lost if they live on in your heart.
EmilyxXx
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Re: Miss you forever
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by bobotheclown on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:59:20 PM AEST
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god this was utterly sad
for death does not say when love ends,
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Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by forever_lonely on
Thursday, 27th November 2003 @ 12:45:40 AM AEST
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....an amazing write.. touched me in a way that others have not.... reading this bought a tear for it brought back memories of someone i love.. who met an ill fate.. thankyou so much for sharing such beauty all the best
luke |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by saddarkgirlreingsthenight on
Tuesday, 16th December 2003 @ 07:42:19 PM AEST
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i have also suffered great loss in my lifetime and that has only been 15 years. i love this peice cause this describes what i can't write. this is an awesome write. i cried.
*A.K.A. Shorty* |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 09:08:49 AM AEST
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i liked your poem my ex boyfriends stepdad just passed and his mom which is my mom in heart. mom is being strong and not only has it changed my ex but it brought us close again.
mark will be missed by all
thank you Rubydo |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by sweetangeluk on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 02:13:02 PM AEST
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Browsing I came across this poem of yours
The tears are flowing after reading this.
It tugged at my heart so much.
I saw the date as being last year
I pray the pain has eased a little but he will continue to live on in your heart always there by your side
A very beautiful poem so heartfelt and wonderfully written
May the angels be with you always
Love SweetAngelukxxxxx |
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Re: Miss you forever
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by Lace1024 on
Wednesday, 17th August 2005 @ 11:42:07 AM AEST
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| That was an awesome poem! I'm so sorry you had to go thru that kind of pain but you're right, you will see each other again. Very well written. |
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