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Music
Contributed by
Red_Silo
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:06:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Where would it leave me?
Where would I be without it to set me free?
Everything, even my smiles would quickly become faded.
The power it has can stop a man from drinking.
It can keep the heaviest soul from sinking.
It may not always be the key to everyone’s happiness,
But anyone that hears another one’s note should know,
Their words may not always be for the ears but for the soul.
Sometimes the music calls our names,
And sometimes we are the music,
But sometimes we don’t know what we sing.
It helps people in the struggle of life when it gets lonely.
Have you ever felt tired or ready to run away?
It’s like a picture on a wall….
It can always help you stay that one last day.
Everything at one point seems to feel all wrong.
But makes it feel all right.
The one may be close or half a world away.
You couldn’t think of what to do,
But a song said all you had to say,
And song had all they had to say to you.
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Red_Silo
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2003-11-25 13:06:46]
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Re: Music
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by doug on
Wednesday, 26th November 2003 @ 02:41:03 PM AEST
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a very nice poem, thanks for sharing
your friend doug |
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Re: Music
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by SoulBonder on
Saturday, 13th December 2003 @ 05:22:07 PM AEST
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try to eliminate extraneous words such as "that", "of" "and" etc. Without them, it would flow a little less choppier.
last line is rough
Good use of similies |
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