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Chinese whispers
Contributed by
broken-glass
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:03:10 PM in AEST
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Mountains out of molehills.
People keep whispering and I'm so hard of hearing.
It's like a community that I'm hardly even part of anymore.
Some ancient game of clouded deception.
Never liked playing hide and seek when the truth is what is hidden.
Not very good at seeking either.
My trust: skittles-
here comes the bowling ball which is your parents' favourite of course.
Good ol' gosseberry me,
I'm developing an attitude.
My friends are getting the worst of it(but ''m not happy!).
All this flowing tounge,
twaddle,
trattle,
rattle,
prattle,
clatter,
blabber,
bibble-babble,
gibble-gabble small talk.
I'm singing kareoke but someones altered all the lines.
Hand me some dynamite......
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2003-11-25 12:03:10]
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Re: Chinese whispers
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:11:36 PM AEST
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Never liked playing hide and seek when the truth is what is hidden.
I lovedthat line. Very interesting poem.
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Re: Chinese whispers
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 03:21:07 PM AEST
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Dear BG,
Very interesting perspective I believe, and very true too!
The truth is always hidden, because no one wants to hear it through and through, but the best part of your poem for me was Mountains out of molehills. That's the other reason they whisper....to blow everything out of view!
Very good, indeed I have to read it again.
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