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open up to you
Contributed by
apollo
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 11:57:21 AM in AEST
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I opened up to you,
I told you how I was feeling,
only to be shot by yourself.
How could I put my trust into you?
How could I be so foolish?
I can now see why I was saved,
it was to be betrayed by you.
Betrayed by the romantic, sweet liar in you.
You tell me if the friendship is strong,
then go for it. I guess you were wrong. .
Now I am as good as dead.
You want me to proclaim my death to you,
so you can see me in the newspapers. .
under the obituaries.
Copyright ©
apollo
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2003-11-25 11:57:21]
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Re: open up to you
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by Broken-glass on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:08:57 PM AEST
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| That is the best poem I have read in a long while. Kudos! |
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Re: open up to you
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by Broken-glass on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:09:41 PM AEST
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| That is the best poem I have read in a long while. Kudos! |
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Re: open up to you
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:34:12 PM AEST
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great poem.. Alot of friends can make you feel that way..
peace and joy
JENNA |
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