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Idk
Contributed by
smackmeplz24
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Monday, 26th August 2002 @ 07:45:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Silenced darkness in the light
so loud and deafening in my sight
said the spider to the fly
you’re the food am not I?
When you leave my sight
deafening darkness will be your light
And when you leave your bed
sounds of Muted light will fill your head.
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Re: Idk
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by Lia on
Tuesday, 27th August 2002 @ 12:17:43 AM AEST
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| This is good...it definately has a lot of potential..I think you should add more to this....and one question...where does the fly come into this??? lol...you are doing good..keep it up!! |
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Re: Idk
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by Smackmeplz24 on
Wednesday, 28th August 2002 @ 05:44:54 AM AEST
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| lol thanx the fly dosnt really play a part its just i was really tired and listening to music and i just kept thinking of oxymorons and other things for no reason and i felt like making something confusing that would make no sense but would also reverse itself kinda i didnt really do it very well but lol it just came out im not gonna change it and just sculpt my poems im just gonna let it flow out. |
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