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Abhorrent Malaise
Contributed by
eternityslyre
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 05:49:06 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Religious sanctions are not mine to bear
For fate has derailed hope and left only despair
When buried in darkness and enveloped by dreams
You're blind to the truth but still dangling upon air
Surreptitious dreams are the sweetest of lies
A perfect aria to befuddle the eyes
The specious demeanor whose call is so dear
Enticing your hope and making truth seem unclear
For nothing is true and my life is all past
A moment to late, a second too fast
I thought I'd the world soon conquer and win
But now I'm a ruin of corruption and sin
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2003-11-25 05:49:06]
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Re: Abhorrent Malaise
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:12:45 PM AEST
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this was beautiful I loved it its a tragedy that no one else commented on it. To bad the comments don't reflect the writers talent...
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Re: Abhorrent Malaise
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by TaintedOptomist on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 12:09:20 PM AEST
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| makes me think of Shakspeare's "The Tragedy of Julius Caesar". |
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Re: Abhorrent Malaise
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by Cobalt on
Friday, 12th December 2003 @ 05:01:26 PM AEST
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| Wow.... Dude I sooo missed this poem. I wish I hadn't. This was amazingly good. I didn't find anything wrong with a single line. It worked very well. |
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