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Bad Guys Wear Black
Contributed by
ArdRi79
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:34:15 AM in AEST
Topic:
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When I'm walking down the cold and windy street,
I say hello and our eyes dont meet,
Is it alot to ask for a hello back,
You dont waste your breath, Im dressed in black.
I pull up through the fumes and stop for a red light
you pull up beside me and you die of fright
"Don't look at the bad man" I hear you say,
then you pull off on your way.
I get to work and shake off the cold when a grumpy man walks in
and shouts "you're a racist", with his forehead an inch from my chin!,
I look in his eyes, what can I say,
I smile and pipe out "have a nice day".
Work is over and I get to the bar,
and forget about you, your hate and your cars
as the cool beer washes away the fumes and the lies
In come my friends black clad, with smiles
This monotonous existence you lead,
from cradle to grave, you all rush at top speed
feigning ignorance of what’s right and wrong
I dress in black because gladly, I don’t belong.
Copyright ©
ArdRi79
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2003-11-25 01:34:15]
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by TearS on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 02:46:55 AM AEST
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| This is really great...You got style in writing poems...Keep going with your excellent poetic mind... |
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 05:17:37 AM AEST
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Very good!
So is that like when I want people 2 think me crazy, I like it then they leave me alone?
Very artistic.
peace out,
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by loopylou on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:20:03 AM AEST
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| love this poem....i wrote one like it called disowning the human race......i love your style..... |
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by mckayla on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 10:57:24 AM AEST
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I like this write!! You know how to put your feelings in words!
mckayla |
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by DJ_The_Young_Grasshopper on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:29:31 PM AEST
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| I love it. |
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by MoonlitAngel on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 07:12:30 PM AEST
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This reminds me of my latest poem, Dress In Black... and I must say, I love the last line! "I dress in black because gladly, I don’t belong." I understand what you're saying all too well! Great write, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:27:29 PM AEST
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good poem I spose I'm bad then to lol. Can I go to the bar with you and we can wash away the lies together.
Peace,
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by Elizabeth_Dandy on
Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 01:41:54 PM AEST
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Brilliantly penned.
I however can think only of the masked men islamic thugs, and worse yet, women veiled with their eyes only showing and possibly hiding a dagger beneath the shrouded garments.
These images come to mind - cannot help it.
Thank you for composing and sharing!
Elizabeth Dandy |
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Re: Bad Guys Wear Black
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by TeenageEmoGirl on
Monday, 9th February 2004 @ 11:05:34 PM AEST
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love the poem to pieces
masterfully written |
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