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THe painting
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:31:54 AM in AEST
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A picture paints a thousand words
this picture you drew and let me see
shows exactly how I really feel
The way I loved you so
I stand here holding you
in my hands looking down
in your eyes begging you not to let go
You just look up at me
as I hold you in my arms
Suddenly I feel so bare
It's just me alone standing there
YOu fall out of my arms
your letting go
while my heart is screamng
NO! NO! NO!
JENNA
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2003-11-25 01:31:54]
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Re: THe painting
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:46:12 AM AEST
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thats a good poem it musta been a good painting what was it called,
I dunno whether its your poem I relate to or the painting. but nice work |
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Re: THe painting
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by Vitreous_Soul on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 02:41:32 AM AEST
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| I definitely like this one. It reminds me of a lot lot things. Also, reminds me of a poem called "The Portrait" that I wrote a few years ago. I'll post it, tell me what you think. Great poem, once again. |
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Re: THe painting
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:51:50 PM AEST
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good write!
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Re: THe painting
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by myheartsvoice on
Thursday, 21st June 2007 @ 01:38:59 PM AEST
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This was quite interesting to read, a bit suspencful i like the painting anology. you always pen such worthy writting no matter how long in between your fine writter Jenn . . .
thank you also for your comment i hope your getting thsese comment's and thank you.
i added it to this comment so you'd get it this way. thanks again Jenn
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