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WOrthless face
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:27:17 AM in AEST
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All I can see if my worthless face in the mirror
I wonder what my soul purpose is to be here
All that comes to my mind is torture
torture of mind
torture of body
And worst of all torture of heart
Just rip me apart, it won't make a difference
with this meaningless object of human race
someone priceless to thy love shall take my
very place and of me won't even be a glimmer
of a trace so now those who despise me can just sit and laugh in my ugly worthless face
JENNA
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2003-11-25 01:27:17]
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Re: WOrthless face
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by ArdRi79 on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:39:46 AM AEST
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| the way the 6th and 7th lines relate is awsome, and I can feel how much it sucks when you base your self worth on the person you're with, nice poem. |
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Re: WOrthless face
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by bobotheclown on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 09:24:28 PM AEST
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I loved this despite its gripping sadness...
Bobo (Joel) |
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