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Something GOne
Contributed by
PhantomVampyress
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Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 01:23:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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I stare at the empty floor....tears fill
my eyes, pictures of us were once there
I looked on my empty wall thinking
"What happened with those meaningful pictures you once drew me?"
I gazed at my bed and saw it is empty
in your spot I sometimes miss those good days where you'd hold me close and I woudn't be froze
I opened a box with your letters inside...
if things would have stayed like those times!
I stare at my clock thinking, hoping and wishing
your gonna love me back the same. it stops so suddenly and I woke up to realize your not ever going to change
JENNA
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2003-11-25 01:23:25]
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Re: Something GOne
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 02:12:53 AM AEST
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This poem sounds like you still care about someone you left behind.It was sad how you must have loved in vain.I hope you find happiness with someone new.There is someone out there waiting for you.
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Re: Something GOne
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by apollo on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 02:54:06 PM AEST
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| that poem was so adorable, yet it saddens me to hear that you have lost someone you truly care about!, i can only imagine what it must feel like to try and reinvent a situation with a loved one, only to realize that won't happen. your poem is very inspirational, and lovely. |
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Re: Something GOne
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by irshprnss on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 06:53:04 PM AEST
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Another Great write Jenna!! I really liked this one!! Diana
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