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Intimate Strangers
Contributed by
juliETTE
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:38:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You slip into my world at night
Then disappear in the morning light
And I can put a name to the face I see
But I don’t know you and you don’t know me
Strangers in almost every sense of the word
Although this claim must sound absurd
Cause your touch ignites fire in my soul
And for you I’d put every dream on hold
Your lips brush mine and I can’t breathe
I feel you close and am filled with such need
I crave you so when daylight falls
After you have entered into these walls
That guard my heart so carefully
Just when I believe you’ve set me free
I am left with only the scent of you
But it’s not enough to carry me through
Until you return with the setting sun
Once again to make me come undone
Tears swallow the best of our memories
Cause I know you’ll never stay with me
You are so accustomed to painting the town
Even if you love me you’ll never settle down
So you see we’re strangers even though
There are parts of you I’ll always know.
Copyright ©
juliETTE
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2003-11-24 23:38:54]
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Re: Intimate Strangers
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:47:32 PM AEST
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Wow!
this is great!
I'm trying for a word big enuff and all I can come up with is supercalafradualisticexpialladoshus!
Needless 2 say this is supurb!
More, please?
peace, joy, luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Intimate Strangers
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by doug on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:57:56 PM AEST
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your lips brush mine and i cant breath
what a great line, i wish i would have thought of it. walk in peace and happiness your friend doug |
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Re: Intimate Strangers
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:04:27 AM AEST
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| well i wish it was a better ending for you.....but the write great..good job...sandy |
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Re: Intimate Strangers
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:22:54 AM AEST
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| Wow.... this is amazing Juliette!!! Don't change a thing!!! |
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Re: Intimate Strangers
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by TheRaven on
Monday, 3rd May 2004 @ 08:05:13 PM AEST
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'Cause your touch ignites fire in my soul'
love that line. so true for one who loves so deeply. great job, hands down to the rhyming.
-The Raven |
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