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My Fight For You
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:21:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
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In your eyes I see the light
Of shining stars in the night
Your love is what lights up my soul
It warms my heart and makes me whole
But to you now my heart does cry
For now a sea between us lies
This Sea against us does make battle
His sword, called Sadness, against mine does clatter
My sword is called Hope, and with it I fight
The battle for love, the battle for right
For just is my cause, and true is my heart
With you I belonged, I knew from the start
To you I'll return
Till then, Love, stand firm
In love we’re together
I'll love you forever
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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Re: My Fight For You
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by emystar on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:33:56 PM AEST
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Wow!!!!!!
This is so swet-n-heavenly!
god bless u both!
peace, joy, luv, hope,
emy |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by doug on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:35:29 PM AEST
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| very sweet poem, your friend doug |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:39:08 PM AEST
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That's so beautiful David...
Thanks for sharing! :) |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by juliette on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:42:18 PM AEST
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This is adorable - such a good read! Great job - Thanks for sharing!
juliette |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by LovingWhispers on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:49:53 PM AEST
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Devotion penned beautifully
Sharon |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 12:08:13 AM AEST
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I know what this write is all about..and its beautiful....but.....
I had a sister that died and her name was linda and it was like i thought of her telling me she loved me isnt that funny weird....sandy you go back and read it like i did....that my sister linda died and that she will love me forever....go back and try it and if it dont read it the way i did ...i know it will be rough cause you wrote from a different point then me....JUST GO AHEAD AND CALL ME CRAZY....LOLLOLLOL |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by Demon_of_Blood on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 04:08:20 PM AEST
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Hmmmm... How dedicated you are... This must a strong bond between the two of you right? That's a rare thing I suppose... Well whoever she is you deserve her for all this "warfare" you put yourself through... so goodluck with that, right?
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Re: My Fight For You
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by faith_my_eyes on
Tuesday, 25th November 2003 @ 08:45:23 PM AEST
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| Argh, David, why do you always make me tear up? STOP THAT! |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by SAT on
Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 04:05:42 PM AEST
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wow!very deep! felt like i was you there for a MINUTE, ALTHOUGH AM A GIRL, SO VISE VERSA! lol
Alicia Marie
~*SAT*~ |
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Re: My Fight For You
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by eatfresh22 on
Sunday, 28th November 2004 @ 01:11:54 AM AEST
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Promises are important.
His sword, called Sadness, against mine does clatter
My sword is called Hope, and with it I fight
The battle for love, the battle for right
For just is my cause, and true is my heart
With you I belonged, I knew from the start
------I liked those lines
~Carrie~ |
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