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Voice in My Head

Contributed by Ewin on Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 10:47:58 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

life is great
life is grand

shut up! life sucks!
oh that's too bad
yeah that's too bad
yeah of corse it's bad
it should if you don't understand
do you understand?
what is there to under stand?

shut up up there!
I don'r need you right now
I'm acctually trying to be happy
and you're not helping me
not one bit

Oh come on
you know you want to die
admit it just admit it
you hate yourself
you hate your life
say it!
say "life sucks, I want to die"

No! Stop!
don't do this to me again
who are you?
I don't know you
leave me alone
where's you come from?

Just go over there
look in the mirror
look you see?
it's you but me
face it
you can't get rid of me
you're stuck here
with me
inside your mind forever

No! Shut up! I don't want to die
not anymore
I've decided that I don't
Now leave me alone
just curl up and die
not me but you
now go, just go!

hey if I die
you die
so ok i die
good-bye!

No stop!
I don'r want to die
hey where'd you go?
did I get rid of you?
hey I want to talk to you
no don't go
I've changed my mind
who am I supossed to talk to?
come back
now I"m sad
I'm lonely now
god ****it!
you left
you voice in my head
yeah you told me to die
to take my own life
but you were my friend
but i guess i will find
a new voice to talk to.

Copyright © Ewin ... [ 2003-11-24 22:47:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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