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After Forever
Contributed by
doug
on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 08:17:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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after forever
I will still love you
after forever
the flowers will grow again
and when the dawn breaks
I'll be thinking of you
after forever
we'll walk hand in hand
then as we whisper
we'll stand in wild fields
and listen to the rivers that
are flowing through the earth
and all of our doubting and
fearing will be finished
after forever
we'll know what love is worth
then God will whisper
he will whisper to us
he will say he loves us
and tell us to explore
and we will ride together
through the mighty valley
after forever
death will be no more
Copyright ©
doug
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2003-11-24 20:17:28] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: After Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Brenda on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 08:28:23 PM AEST (User
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this is very touching i loved it. |
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Re: After Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by positivelypurple on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:02:56 PM AEST (User
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Can I have your phone number? Lucky girl to have someone write about her this way! |
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Re: After Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:14:43 PM AEST (User
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Very beautiful, Doug.. I love this..
Jenni |
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Re: After Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by shelby on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:43:09 PM AEST (User
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lovely each and every word
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Re: After Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by juliette on
Monday, 24th November 2003 @ 11:54:11 PM AEST (User
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This kicks butt! I am such a sucker for a man with words.......giggle,giggle. Truly I have a visual image of "After Forever", and I always say that's what makes a good write. This is the one I needed to read tonight! Love it! Thanks for sharing!
juliette
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Re: After Forever
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Friday, 5th December 2003 @ 03:33:54 PM AEST (User
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dearest doug, excellent write, ive scanned over your titles too, and your very creative both in inspiration and poetic content, a pleasure to read you:) hugs n' love nessa |
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